Start of entry. M:46 State of war Authorisation A.D.M.I.N. Level 4 ( Clearance High 956021)
Cleared for Observation
Subject Authorised to proceed.
“David, help me! They’re taking me David! Don’t Let them hurt me David! Make them stop David! DAVIDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!
David woke with a start, his body covered in sweat. It had been six months since Alpha Gamma 5 had talked to him. David was lying in his hospital bed, waiting for tomorrow to come as he would be discharged fully recovered. He did not know if Alice was still alive or not. ” Don’t think like that, of course she is alive”. David removes the surgical tape around his arm and carefully removes the I.V needle. He jolts as the thin needle touches a nerve. He slowly climbs out of bed and walks down the corridor to where his footlocker is. Unclasping the lock and quietly opening the locker, David found all his belongings, his pistol, armour, gauntlets, combat fatigues, and ammunition belt. He quickly changed and under his clothes he also found his helmet, targeting system fully operational. He put the helmet on, eyepiece slotting into place over his right eye. Streams of data flood his eyes as the eyepiece analyses his surroundings. Loading his pistol, and attaching a silencer, David crept to the end of the dark corridor. One single Royal Guardsman was standing to attention right in front of the double door. A small crack, and the guardsman crumples to the floor, a bullet lodged in this throat.
Quickly, David pulled him onto a cleaning cupboard and stuffed him inside. A few seconds of picking the lock, and David walked into the main atrium of the hospital. The doors leading the way out silently opened for him with a small hiss. David walked out feeling the cool breeze of wind on his face. He scanned the area, looking for hostiles. None were found. David walked to the car park and found just what he wanted. A Mark 7 Tiger sudan. He picked the lock, and soon he was sliding out of the car park in his new wheels, and no body was the wiser.
David’s first thought was to find Alpha Gamma and find out what she knew regarding Alice’s death order. Then he would find out where Experts last position was. And then he would kill her. “That girl is going to pay for what she did to me and Alice. I cannot believe I was fooled into thinking she was on our side.”
David put his foot down on the accelerator and slammed the car into 6th gear. His speedometer hit 190 km per hour as he sped along the road. His revenge would not be denied.
High Lord Admin was quietly reading a book in his Sanatorium. He brought a small cup of tea to his lips and took a small sip. The sweet liquid rolled down his throat, relaxing him. Suddenly the giant double doors were thrown open and L-W and Alphacommando marched in.
“My lord”, L-W said. ” We have a report that David has been reported missing from the Inquisition hospital. He may be coming this way.”
” Do I see fear in your words High Commissar? Do you think the has the skill to get into this holy chapel? Guarded by hundreds of men, and yourselves? No I think not. He would not be foolish enough to strike me. If you are worried, station the chapel on high alert. But do not disturb me again with something so insignificant”.
‘You asked to be kept up-to-date on David’s movement and activities my lord. I am doing what was requested of me”
” ARE YOU CONTRADICTING ME L-W”? Admin yelled.
” No my lord. Your Will be done “. L-W said. ” Come brother Alpha. We must attend to this matter”.
“Of course brother”, Alphacommando replied.
L-W and Alpha turned and marched out of the sanatorium.
” Good my Lord Admin, you must kill not worry about that fly. You are safe in these walls”, said Expert, emerging from the shadows. ” I sense it will be the girl David is more concerned about, not us”.
” Yes my old friend, Alpha Plateau is alerted to David and more guards are stationed there. David will have to battle an army before he could even interrogate Alpha Gamma to the whereabouts of his beloved Alice. How pitiful and weak he is”.
They both began to laugh. It echoed off the high walls of the room. Soon, David would be destroyed, and the only thing obstructing their way would soon be gone. Soon, a new world would arise. And nothing could stop it. Except for someone. And he isn’t dead. Yet.
David saw the lights of Alpha Plateau HQ in the distance. He knew Diana was there. He would kill that puppet and find where Alice was. Nothing, not any army on the face of the planet, could stop him. David flicked the catch of his pistol to 3 round burst.
” This is going to be one hell of a fight ” David said to himself as he roared towards the base.





September 10, 2009
#1
Duuuuude……….
September 10, 2009
#2
This took a turn for the dark.
September 10, 2009
#3
Looking good keep it up man
September 10, 2009
#4
nice, looks like a good fight sequence here man, i dnt see how there willbe more charectors tho, as that would only complicate things
September 10, 2009
#5
@Megaraptor check your Forum PM box
and this story rocks….. cant wait for more
September 10, 2009
#6
another well written part. it keeps getting interesting. can’t wait for part 6
September 10, 2009
#7
o and thnkx for doing this so quick
September 10, 2009
#8
Good story, like the inclusion of the site’s main faces. A little egotistical though. Try not to turn yourself into a Mary Sue character.
September 10, 2009
#9
Twists and more twists. I am very intrigued by the way this story is going.
Your going to need help. Even if you were a space marine you could be defeated, but not without destroying most of your foes pawns. Might i suggest a little … Chaos to spice things up?
Great story. Keep it up.
September 11, 2009
#10
@ sean
Who is mary sue?
September 11, 2009
#11
@ Prime chaos
Prime chaos is standing at the front enterence. A bullet shot rings out. 3 secounds later, the bullet impacts PM’s skull. He falls down, dead.
K done.
September 11, 2009
#12
@David
Watch your tone, don’t let the apples fall far apart from the tree.
September 11, 2009
#13
Diana, the Prime chaos thing was a joke.
In the story diana, I am angry. I wouldn’t insult you in real life. And could you be less criptic please. I am unfamiliar with the term.
don’t let the apples fall far apart from the tree
Thank you
September 11, 2009
#14
A Mary Sue is basically the writer inserting himself as the main character. Or making the main character perfect and exactly the way they would want to be themselves.
September 11, 2009
#15
@ mega fire.
Thanks mate, will keep that in mind.
September 11, 2009
#16
“A Mary Sue is basically the writer inserting himself as the main character. Or making the main character perfect and exactly the way they would want to be themselves.”
David, if you need an example. Bella Swan from twilight. She’s, probably what Meyer wanted to be in high school and Edward was…welll you can figure that out.
September 11, 2009
#17
@David
Sweet……..though I always wondered if Admin could turn evil, or is it really Expert corrupting him? mmhh interesting…..
September 12, 2009
#18
There we go. Part 6 has been sent. Wicked more awesome.
Thanks again Admin
September 12, 2009
#19
@David
Yeah, just what Blood_Dancer said, like if you situate yourself on the side of Mary Sue and imitate the perspective of Edward on my side.
September 13, 2009
#20
Well I tried including some new people in the next chapter. Think I over did it though