CB-Delta stood at the back of an alleyway. In fact, it was the alleyway across the street from the one they were in. “What are we doing here?”
Jake put his hand to CB’s mouth, and then pulled it back, realizing it wouldn’t do much. “Quiet! This place is top secret!”
CB looked left and right. It looked like a regular alleyway to him. “If it’s so secret, why don’t you live here?”
“Because, it would look suspicious!” Jake shut his eyes, thinking about how stupid he sounded. “Never mind! I’ll explain later” Jake walked to the back wall. He then started pacing from the corner, until he reached his fifth step, turned and faced the wall, and counted the bricks from the ground, up. Once the got to the tenth brick, he stopped. “Ah ha!” He stuck out his finger, and pushed it against the brick with all his might. It didn’t budge. Not only did it not budge, but it nearly broke his finger. He collapsed at the unexpected pain. CB-Delta stood there and watched.
Next thing CB knew, Jake was up again pressing the button with a different finger. CB was annoyed. Was this a joke? He was standing in the back of an alley watching a freak of nature push and now kick at a brick wall. What could be worse.
Mass Havoc was there too, becoming annoyed with Jake. If he could take over he would bash in this guys skull. There was one thing bothering him though. He had forgotten his memory, and knew nothing about his past, or what he was doing in this robot, but there was something familiar. Something that he just couldn’t place. It was like a buzzing in the back of his head. Familiar, but scary. It felt like it was apart of him, but at the same time something entirely alien.
Jake, now exhausted was resting his head against the wall. Why would the button not work. He slammed his fist, without energy, into the wall. He stood up and looked at it. He was going to use his head this time. That way, if it worked, it worked, otherwise, it wouldn’t matter to him. He leaned back to add power to his soon to be suicide bash, then stopped. He opened his eyes and looked at the wall, and broke into a sweat. In anguish, he brought up his finger one more time, and pushed it into the brick next to the first one.
There was a beep.
Everyone flinched as the floor below them disappeared. Shortly after noticing, they dropped into the darkness.
“What’s going on?” Shouted CB, who wasn’t sure if he was happy or sad that he wasn’t watching Jake bash his brains into a brick wall.
“I don’t know! This is new! They used to have an elevator!” Jake enjoyed the feeling of being in an elevator while it was dropping. Now that there was no elevator he found that he didn’t enjoy the drop quite as much. In fact, he started screaming.
Suddenly they stopped moving. They stopped freaking out in time to notice they were being suspended by some sort of energy field, just before they were dropped again. This time they fell only two feet, which apparently was just far enough to break Jakes nose.
Jake opened his eyes, and saw the feet of CB-Delta who was already standing. Knees wobbling, he stood up to see where he was. The room was pitch black, all he could see was CB. Jake had night vision, so he was sure the room was quite big. Great. Everyone must have moved away. Now he’s stuck some one hundred feet below ground with a robot who could turn on him at any second. At that moment the room was illuminated. Jake was almost blinded, but he was relieved that there was someone there who could help He heard a clank, and his eyes adjusted to see CB-Delta spark, and collapse on the floor. He then felt a sharp pain as a dart hit him in the back of the neck. He became dizzy, and fell to the floor. Just before he lost consciousness, he saw that he was approached by two people. One was short, and thin, the other was huge.
“Well well, look what the cat drug in!”
Ok, This time there are no idea submissions. Not because I don’t like you, but this part is so long I have to introduce it in multiple parts, so there will be a few, where the story is already decided. PaPPa JUDAS is the winner of the OC contest. Good Job. I hope to have more next time. Please…
Still, feel free to comment
Thanks.
Samuel Black





October 2, 2009
#1
Has this article even gotten any views? This is sort of depressing.
October 2, 2009
#2
Oh, huh. Sorry bout that Sam. I like it.
October 2, 2009
#3
Cool stuff I can’t wait to see how you adapt the input I and those few others have given I’ve enjoyed so far. I wonder how different the Ideas I shared will be interprated by you in your story compared to what I was thinking when I wrote them.
October 3, 2009
#4
@Sam
Fate can sometimes be considered as a bitter joke. I observed your story for 6 hours during the first day after the posting of this thread and I saw no comment.
October 3, 2009
#5
@Sam
I like your story, your writing style and i hope that you don’t stop this Story just because you’ve had low feedback.
Keep it up.
October 3, 2009
#6
i liked the story, but we got cut off! lol
October 5, 2009
#7
lol thanks guys. Don’t worry. I won’t stop writing. Any body noticed the pun in the last line?
October 5, 2009
#8
This comment is just to make sure you dont loose intrest due to low feedback
October 5, 2009
#9
This story is actually pretty cool, and I’m a very picky reader. I LIKE IT!
October 6, 2009
#10
@PaPPa JUDAS
If you could email me, (check POD part 3 @ bottom) I can get you OC pics of your characters. Thanks.