“General White!”
General white was in a daze. Could this really be happening?
“General White!”
The Virus, CB-Delta, The entire defense system. Not possible. He tried to piece this together in his head.
Things blurred even more, and he noticed a sharp pain in his chest. He hit the floor. His heart had stopped.
Mass Havoc was elated. This was amazing! This sudden rush of data. He was glad he was used for this assignment.
So many files to explore. Too bad. All he was allowed to do is shut down the security grid. So sad. Maybe he
could copy all the access files and- wait! What’s this? CB-Delta? MH had never heard of such technology. Hmm…
This is worth something, he thought. He broke into the control database.
CB-Delta sprang to life. His eyes turned green and the skull emblem appeared on his chest. The room stood still
in sheer shock. Suddenly one of the agents exploded.
MH was enjoying this. Lightning fast reflexes. Heavy beam cannons that were is so powerful, any direct hit
could be considered a headshot. AU wouldn’t stand a chance. But now, it’s theirs. It’s mine!
The building was in a rush. Every agent was heading down to the control room. The entire area on lockdown.
Matthew however was heading the opposite direction. He had to get out of there. MH had never acted this way
before! As he climbed the stairs there was an explosion behind him.
Blood shot everywhere as CB-Delta blasted agents away as they came through the door. MH was overexcited. His
new toy was perfect! All he had to do was-
“ACCESS DENIED. UNIDENTIFIED ENTITY CONTROLING SYSTEM. ATTEMPTING TO EJECT.”
MH was flung from the controls. What happened? He thought. He had never been successfully blocked from any
system.
“UNIDENTIFIED ENTITY OCCUPYING SYSTEM. PREPARING TO TERMINATE.”
MH felt a sting as VK’s stabbed at his back. He darted to another server, with over ten VK’s in pursuit.
CB-Delta was free. He opened his eyes and looked around. What he saw disturbed him. Men who he had worked with.
Who had worked on him, and created him, now dead. Dead by his hands. That virus has made him kill his creators.
That very second he swore he would do the same to the virus. The VK’s he sent after the pest should clean him
up after-
CB-delta was suddenly shot in the head by a surviving agent.
The VK’s fazed and disappeared. Now with nothing else to get in his way MH jumped the controls of CB-Delta. This
time he would not be ejected. The robot was still in working order, but wouldn’t be if he stayed there much
longer. CB blasted a hole in the wall, and using foot boosters, jetted into the sky. He made it! His master
would be promoted for sure, and he might gain a bigger role in AU himself.
“WARNING! TERMINAL MALFUNCTION! SYSTEM SHUTDOWN IMMINANT!”
MH panicked. This wasn’t supposed to happen. Everything had gone flawlessly.
“WARNING! TERMINAL MALFUNCTION! SYSTEM SHUTDOWN IMMINANT!”
Everything blacked out.
“SYSTEM REBOOT SUCCSESFUL. GREETINGS. LAST BOOT DATE-01/12/03-. CURRENT DATE -05/02/09-”
CB-Delta opened his eyes. He was in an alleyway. He couldn’t remember anything. Who was he? Where was he?
Before he could answer, he heard a scream. Suddenly pantsless man in a business jacket ran out of the alleyway.
CB-Delta was stunned by the lack of pants and stood frozen in place.
Suddenly he was jumped! His attacker clawed at his back, and wrapped himself around CB’s leg. CB, not in any
danger at all, kicked the pest into the wall and held his gun on him.
It was a cat… or a person… or… whatever. He was scrawny, and grey with blonde hair on the top of his
head, wearing and old jacket and a brand new pair of business slacks.
Amused, CB pointed both his guns at the ca-… thing, who was still dizzy from being slammed into the wall.
“This tried to attack me?”
He said out loud.
“Hmm… What should I do with you???”
Now It’s your turn Factpile! By commenting, you get a say in what happens next. Yup! You get to control the storyline!
As long as you fallow the rules you can request anything!!! (yes I said this last time.)
Rules:
I wont kill off a character without him already being in danger.
No sex. Sorry.
Don’t tell someone their idea is stupid please, or any other form of laming.
Thanks.
Other than that you’re good. Please add your ideas and become apart of this story. Can’t wait to hear your ideas! 
Samuel Black
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September 1, 2009
#1
well the cat thing and cbdeltas own mind were surprising, but still a good story
the cat thing, sensing his confusion, tries to trick him
or
more of his systems are damaged than he realized and his gun fires off killingthe cat(in danger) by accident
September 1, 2009
#2
is the cat thing a mutant? a genetically engineered soldier? a humanoid species? i’m confused….
September 1, 2009
#3
@Blood Dancer
Hopefully the story will get far enough to find that out!
@ss
Thanks for the suggestion.
September 1, 2009
#4
Perhaps unsteady pact between Mathew and Dangerous opertunistic third party in the war between two factions after being betrayed by own side a loose end needing to be dealt with. More internal war between persona of CB-Delta and Mass Havoc. MORE BLOOD.
September 1, 2009
#5
Hmm. Based on the picture of your gravatar and the catman in the picture, i’d say that the catman is actually your personification of you in the story.
Either that or there are a few things he could be:
A. He will be a main character who will aid CB-Delta and help him defeat AU or
B. He’s a spy genetically engineered by AU to track down CB-Delta and trick him into going to their main base. However as he starts to be with CB-Delta he starts having second thoughts about turning him in and double crosses AU.
Bare with me, C might seem mighty strange and out of the ordinary.
C. He is part of a secret society called FactPilers who fight against AU and secretly aid the government without being found out. He will lead CB to the secret base of the Factpilers and there they will repair him and allow him to fight against AU with them.
Or, i could just be overthinking things and making strange thoughts.
September 1, 2009
#6
o o o, i just had a thought maybe 1 side will hire mercenary charector to bring in CBdelta
September 1, 2009
#7
I’m glad someone recognized the similarity so soon. I was almost sure that there would be at least 10 “CB blows this freaking abominations head off!!!” before I could explain how “loved” I felt.
September 1, 2009
#8
What if this cat-man belongs to one of many bands of Genetic freaks from a nuclear wasteland created by the war? Possible awnser to the third party idea I had in my previous post. Outcast by society trying to stay alive many are but mere savages others trying to find a place for their kind in the new order that will exsist when the dust finaly settles in the aftermath of this conflict, some by any means no matter the price.
September 1, 2009
#9
These ideas are great. I need to ask however that the comments lead to what happens next. Mainly because I can use these cool ideas, but not always immediately. They might be something I add later.
September 1, 2009
#10
CB blows this freaking abomination’s head off!!!
LOL srry i had to.
September 1, 2009
#11
@Prime Chaos – and the virus is my personification
@everyone else – i got a new gravatar!!!
September 1, 2009
#12
Man with no pants Raises alarm over the theft of his pants by cat boy and appearance of CB Delta angy mob and or solders from the faction controlling that area after breif chase and fire fight with both CB Delta and the mutant find shelter in the underground (time for character biulding backstory) more conflict between Mass Havoc and CB Delta inside computer systems etcetra etcetra.
September 2, 2009
#13
The pants-less man should get shorts.
September 2, 2009
#14
why isn’t my gravatar working…
maybe it will… sorry. since all of my posts have been off of this subject, i would like to say something that is on subject… though i can’t further the story line, because im am the authors brother… (so i could ask him what he wanted to happen, then post it, then he would say good idea!) so i am just going to say instead of saying “what if (insert character here) is… “or “maybe this character is…” you should say something that comes next… for example “matthew finds CB and the cat person and gets authorities to arrest them. (this is only an example)
if my writing this comment comes across as rude to anyone, i am sorry i don’t mean to offend, it’s hard to read (as in understand the authors emotion…) something that is written.
September 2, 2009
#15
And this is why my brother isn’t the one replying to all your ideas. I had to read that twice just to understand it. This is also why he’s not writing.
if my writing this comment comes across as rude to anyone, i am sorry i don’t mean to offend, it’s hard to read (as in understand the authors emotion…) something that is written… If that made sense… just kidding.
September 2, 2009
#16
Wow. and that’s what I get for not changing the name and email field. (I made the previous comment…)
September 3, 2009
#17
it reminded me of Digimon season 3 with the D-reaper in both worlds destroying every thing maybe, after taking out the United Anarchists their leader gets assimilated into the virus and the virus calls itself like “The spirit of anarchy” or something. It arives in the real world and turns others into “anarchy cyborgs” like terminators then ALL humans unite Against the Cyborgs and anarchy.
Just my Idea
September 3, 2009
#18
I have a good one good one (just don’t believe the hype)….How about Jake finds a way to get the virus out of CB Delta??? Possibly??
September 3, 2009
#19
Hmm… interesting. That would make him a physical character…
September 5, 2009
#20
that art style… you could definitely go into the webcomics business.
September 7, 2009
#21
@Dracosphinx
Thanks!
@Every1
I’m sorry for the long wait for the next one. My day has gotten really busy lately. I’ll do what I can.
September 7, 2009
#22
it seems so…. familiar… almost like a dream, or a day like a dream….