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Death Monk

The dark city night would provide cover for his intended actions. This wasn’t the first time the Death Monk had the insatiable desire to feel the life force of some street whore enter into his mind. The streets of Durbin were not particularly clean near this part of the town. The local pubs were lucky to have anything more than a dirt floor and a fire pit for their patrons. At any moment in time one could find tests of strength against some hearty barbarians, or a contest of skill against the archers of Grayspire. Of course, at all times one had to be alert for the many thieves trying to earn their way into the local guild by a either a night’s worth of pilfering, or a daring attempt at a local temple to come away with some religious artifact.

None of that was on his mind as he scanned the potential victims. He almost felt sorry for the tramp that he was going to take that night. No remorse for their useless souls, but instead of how they wasted their lives by offering their bodies in exchange for gold, items and most times, food for their wretched children born into the world. Why would a whore think that she could actually do any good by bringing in another mouth to feed? But none of that mattered to him now.

He finally spotted her. The one that would please his Mistress. The whore he sought was cute for having shorter hair. At least it was brushed, and she looked cleaner than most of the other street walkers that night. Maybe she was just getting started for the night. No matter, this wouldn’t take long.

The Death Monk reached up and pulled down his hood to reveal his shaved head and piercing gray eyes sparkling in the thought of what he was going to do in the next few minutes. He caught her attention by tripping himself into her.

“Hey!” she shouted. “The first grope is free, the next one will cost you.”

The Death Monk smirked. That trick worked every time.

“How much for your company, my lady?”

She gazed over his tall frame twice and then stopped, looking at his crotch.

“Well, honey, what’d you have in mind?” as she leaned in towards him, placing her hand on his upper thigh.

“My lady, I’ve never had the company of a woman before, so I…”

“Oh. You’re pure! Well, that changes things now doesn’t it? Since you’ve never been with someone of my…talents, for five gold, I’ll make sure you won’t forget my name.”

“What is your name, my lady?” he asked.

“Whatever you want it to be, honey.” as she playfully pressed her body against his.

“Can we go somewhere with some more privacy?” as he spoke with more confidence.

“Of course, but first, I need to make sure that you’re serious?” her hand extended towards him.

“Certainly.” He reached into his cloak, securing his money bag while pulling out the payment and placed it in her hands.

“Follow me.” the short haired whore said as she turned towards Little J’s pub.

He began to follow her as he surveyed the scene. No guards in this part of town. A nice dark alley way next to the pub. Easy escape route with many places to dispose of the body afterwards. Then as he was just about to make his suggestion, he caught glimpse of his Mistress standing atop the pub. Pale skin. Ice blue eyes. Long dark hair gently resting her cape and bosom. She was just as gorgeous as she was dangerous. She made eye contact and nodded.

The Death Monk spoke with authority to the whore.

“Can we step over here for a moment?”

He gestured to the alley way.

“Well now, for your first time you’re a frisky one, aren’t ya?” She took three steps into the alley.

At first all she felt was his hands groping her at her chest, but then he moved his massive fingers up to her throat. His hands reached around her larynx and he quickly squeezed the air out and trapped whatever her final moments of oxygen would provide her in her lungs. She tried to reach back at first, then she tried to twist her body to get an angle on him.

But he was soo strong. She looked into his eyes and saw anger. Then blackness. She blinked again and saw his fist coming down on her face. The pain never came like she thought it would. Instead, she felt all her memories of her childhood. The good times, and bad things that shaped her to what she was today. She felt the connection to her body losing it’s grip. She felt as if she was floating. Gently hovering.

She looked down. She saw her body getting pummeled by the man with the shaved head. Why was he doing that? Why wasn’t anyone coming to her aid? Why didn’t she feel anything? Then at that moment, she realized what was happening. She felt an endless ache in her soul as she thought about her brother that was waiting for her to come home the next morning.

But that feeling was instantly replaced by a sense of surrounding cold. She felt her life essence being torn apart, to exist no more, and to matter nothing to anyone.

She felt a tug behind her, or was it above her? She felt her existence fading into nothingness. And in the next moment, she was no more.

“Excellent work.” The Mistress said as she landed on the ground next to the monk.

“Thanks.” The Death Monk said.

“Where the hell can I dispose this?” looking down at the body of the short haired whore.

“I’ll take care of it. You should join your friends now. I will summon you again when needed.”

“Yes Mistress.” The Death Monk bowed, but waited.

“What is it?” She asked.

“When will I see the evolution?” The monk asked.

“Next time you’re in combat, you’ll notice it. Now leave me.”

“Yes, Mistress Divine.”

The Death Monk emerged from the darkened alley way. No one noticed him.

“Amazing what those vampires can do.” He thought to himself as he entered Little J’s Pub.

– War Wizard

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37 Comments
  • Matapiojo
    October 21, 2009
    #1

    YES!

    War Wizard finaly makes his debut.

    This is good. Give us MOAR.

  • Space marine
    October 21, 2009
    #2

    I didn’t know Admin had a thing for role-plays…I bet Diana gets kicks out of such stories. (TEEHEE!)

  • Matapiojo
    October 21, 2009
    #3

    Yoou kidding me?

    He is one of the biggest DnD fanboys here (title being contested by yours truly).

  • Matapiojo
    October 21, 2009
    #4

    Now that I think about it, I am actually surprised he hasn’t taken part in Sanctity Falls.

  • Space marine
    October 21, 2009
    #5

    I think he is really busy with updates. Factpile is going through “Surgery” right now with the “New layout” (Don’t include pagination for the love of god!)

  • Matapiojo
    October 21, 2009
    #6

    BTW, War Wiz.

    When Diablo 3 comes out, I expect you to play the far right guy with me:
    http://us.blizzard.com/diablo3/characters/

    P.S. I also expect Baron to play the far left guy

  • Diana
    October 21, 2009
    #7

    “I didn’t know Admin had a thing for role-plays…I bet Diana gets kicks out of such stories. (TEEHEE!)”

    Are you trying to be satirical on me?

  • Matapiojo
    October 21, 2009
    #8

    Wow, I feel stupid.

    I JUST got what SM meant by that.

    Pure fail on me.
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  • Baron Somebody
    October 21, 2009
    #9

    Do I have to get the other Diablos to understand number three? As I have stated before the witch doctor looks badass

  • Jwlynas
    October 22, 2009
    #10

    Impressive stuff indeed. Reminds me of the mighty Grimlok from Neverwinter nights…

    More is needed!

    As to Diablo three, if you find yourselves in need of a barbarian, I’ll be the guy with two axes and a beard that reaches my knee’s

  • Matapiojo
    October 22, 2009
    #11

    @Baron

    I can’t really predict how the Witch Doctor will be integrated into the story, but Diablo is not a game that wraps you in its plot too tightly. The game does have a rich background story, but the fun really comes in hacking and blasting your way through masses of unholy nightmares.

    As it stands, Diablo 2 has a whole act set in a jungle (act 3). This part of the story is heavily infused with central american mysticism dashed with a bit of caribean voodoo.

    Kurast Docks (safe zone):
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/KurastDocks.jpg

    Spider Forest:
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/SpiderForest.jpg

    Great Marsh:
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/GreatMarsh.jpg

    Flayer Jungle/Dungeon:
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/FlayerJungle.jpg
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/FlayerDungeon.jpg

    Kurast (ruined city):
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/LowerKurast.jpg
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/KurastBazaar.jpg
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/Sewers.jpg
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/UpperKurast.jpg
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/Travincal.jpg

    Durace of Hate:
    http://classic.battle.net/images/battle/diablo2exp/images/maps/act3/DuranceofHate.jpg

    Now, on this map for Diablo 3 ( http://us.blizzard.com/diablo3/world/worldmap.xml ), you can see the Kurast region on the midle of the eastern continent. Tose Diablo 2 screen caps come from that region.

    D3’s Witch Doctor are said to come from the Toragan Jungles. That is immediately south west from Kurast, so I imagine the plot surrounding them will be similar or reminiscent to D2’s Act 3.

    That’s as much as I know at this point about that item. Really, you don’t need to know ANYTHGING about diablo’s plot to play the game. 80%+ of the current D2 community have no idea what the story is about…

    Bottom line, you dont need to know the previous games to play 3. You could always come to me with any questions you might have.

    @Jwlynas

    That works out cause I am leaning towards the Wizard at this point. We would have a well represented group!

  • Baron Somebody
    October 23, 2009
    #12

    Hell yeah, it sounds pretty cool…when does D3 come out? I plan on getting tons of games for Christmas (namely ANOTHER Metal Arms disc, ANOTHER Battelfront 2 disc, Halo 1 for the PC, and Killzone 1…)

  • ss
    October 23, 2009
    #13

    great story, does any one no how to post on factpilers?

  • admin
    October 23, 2009
    #14

    @ss – just send me the story +plus a banner or image idea that you want to my email admin at factpile dot com

  • ss
    October 23, 2009
    #15

    thanks admin im not sure if ill do it but i was thinking about puting up a story that i actually came up with for something else but think it works better as a story than a role play

  • Matapiojo
    October 23, 2009
    #16

    The release date is yet undetermined, Baron. I wish it was out before christmas, but I doubt Blizz would release D3 before Star Craft 2.

    What they are doing for the Diablo community in the meantime is working on a new content patch for D2. There is no release date on that either.

    ….Ugh, Blizzard.

    /wrist

  • Sam the heretic
    October 23, 2009
    #17

    @General Factpiler Populace

    is there any certain requirement for one who may wish to post a…literary piece? I ask as that…one.

    I hear the call of the gods… “be our herald”

    Send your article and banner or image idea to admin @ factpile dot com – Admin

  • Space marine
    October 24, 2009
    #18

    @Diana
    I saw your role-play with the Vampire and the werewolves. SO I AM! MWHAHAHA!

  • Diana
    October 24, 2009
    #19

    The g— is truly young, without question….

  • Dracosphinx
    October 24, 2009
    #20

    a new content patch for D2
    It’s like buying half a car and getting the rest as it is made… Damn I hate DLC.

  • Marche
    October 24, 2009
    #21

    Just go around to reading this.
    Can’t wait for the sequel.

  • Space marine
    October 24, 2009
    #22

    Without question eh? I don’t like that tone commissar….

  • Dracosphinx
    October 24, 2009
    #23

    @SM… When did you wake up? Jesus man.

  • Space marine
    October 25, 2009
    #24

    What? Download the Lost planet 2 demo…Its awesome!

  • orpheus12
    October 25, 2009
    #25

    What did the demo show
    I mean are there new weapons and characters and monsters?
    Also how about the mechas

  • David
    October 25, 2009
    #26

    Wow……….

    Admin is scary. LOL

  • Diana
    October 25, 2009
    #27

    “I don’t like that tone commissar…”

    You will never like it unless you sip from the “nectar”.

  • Diana
    October 25, 2009
    #28

    Nice mini-literotica you conjured here admin…Magically unique.

  • Space marine
    October 25, 2009
    #29

    The demo is full of win. Grapling monsters and shooting them, Giant rocket launchers, MASSIVE monsters…And the Mecha’s are good too.

  • Sam the heretic
    October 25, 2009
    #30

    Thanks for the info admin. Now…a story must be conceived..characters,setting, theme etc etc

    anyone have any ideas? I have the mechanics but lack the yarn to thread….

  • Marche
    October 25, 2009
    #31

    Space Marine,how could you forget one of the more epic parts of the demo.

    Letting the monster swallowing you whole,destroying its insides,and shitting you out.

  • Dracosphinx
    October 25, 2009
    #32

    @Marche. That was prolly the most epic part of the whole demo. it’s only worth it in co-op though cause they keep shooting it from the outside.

  • David
    October 26, 2009
    #33

    Ok whats the deal with dianas nectar? I still don’t get it.

  • ss
    October 26, 2009
    #34

    @ sam
    what time period?
    @david
    lol dont worry about it

  • Sam the heretic
    October 27, 2009
    #35

    @SS

    present or future based. my knowledge on the”past” is sketchy at best, though i could write on a general “swordfight” between Chuck of Norrishire against Mr. T of Teabagingsville

    i had an idea of a future(as in 50yrs or so) punisher…..

  • Who?
    October 28, 2009
    #36

    WOW. Excellant story Admin. We need more!

  • Space marine
    October 28, 2009
    #37

    Actually, I shot the giant bastard until it fell on it’s face and climbed in its mouth with a VS Shotgun…Then got crapped out…

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